5 Comments

  1. Scott Kelsey
    September 3, 2009 @ 8:28 am

    Wow. If there is ever a post that made me want to go to a (re)treat…that’s it right there.

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  2. Jeff Walton
    September 3, 2009 @ 8:46 am

    Great haiku, Logan — maybe we should have a haiku writing contest as our “Fall Treat” ice breaker.

    Fall Treat is almost here
    Bicycling during free time
    David will ride fast

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  3. Jeff Walton
    September 3, 2009 @ 8:49 am

    Oops, I just realized that ‘almost’ has two syllables. Poetry roadkill!

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  4. Christine
    September 4, 2009 @ 11:44 am

    Parish – ute retreat?
    The Jones gang can’t wait to go
    and build memories.

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  5. Erica C.
    September 4, 2009 @ 3:12 pm

    Autumn treat is neat.
    Change beat feet to resting feet.
    Character complete.

    Not so sure if Haikus should rhyme…

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